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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Apr 22, 2008 16:33:11 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Laying crumpled on the floor
My hand reaching out, reaching for the door
I open my mouth to shout
But the words never come out
Never, never, never[/glow] |
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Post by //The/Pendulum/Swings// on Apr 22, 2008 17:33:38 GMT -5
wow. Did you write that?  |
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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Apr 22, 2008 18:17:06 GMT -5
Yes, I did
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Post by //The/Pendulum/Swings// on Apr 22, 2008 19:26:34 GMT -5
It's really good!  |
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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Apr 22, 2008 20:03:34 GMT -5
Is it? -shrugs- Well, I'm glad you think so! :-D
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Post by //The/Pendulum/Swings// on Apr 22, 2008 23:51:55 GMT -5
ya. It's cool.
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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Apr 23, 2008 15:36:05 GMT -5
Well thank you! :-)
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Post by angels.to.demons on Apr 24, 2008 21:40:11 GMT -5
Oh, a pretty poem. You're good at poems, Raven; I suck at them really bad. Except, perhaps, haiku.
And it rhymes - my favorite kind of poems! x3
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Post by //The/Pendulum/Swings// on Apr 24, 2008 22:31:14 GMT -5
Yay rhymes! Me too. Was never very good at that.
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