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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Jun 1, 2008 20:07:43 GMT -5
On the pages of this book Lies my soul Shattered and Broken That which is not quite whole I leave these words as a token To prove that I was here Though I am no longer near
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Harmonious Beauty A Sense of Duty A Lone Wolf Howling At The Moon Asphodel All But Strewn Upon The Ground And Below that Mound Lies A Body Bound Wings Spread Out Like A Dove
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Laying crumpled on the floor My hand reaching out, reaching for the door I open my mouth to shout But the words never come out
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can not cope no longer any hope wrap the rope around my neck
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I can only write During the long, dark night Some might say It's just not right But I say Always darkest before dawn Always night before the light
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Post by angels.to.demons on Jun 1, 2008 20:39:03 GMT -5
oooohhh... how pretty. ^^ you're so good at poetry, Raven. <3
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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Jun 2, 2008 7:02:46 GMT -5
- glomp attack - Thank you very much! :-)
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Post by Hidden on Jun 2, 2008 17:51:35 GMT -5
Niiice. You're really good. I like it. Even if it is depressing...
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Post by //The/Pendulum/Swings// on Jun 3, 2008 19:18:28 GMT -5
Me likes it too! It's really good! (I like the subtle if not intentional refrences to this site. ) I also have some if you'd like to hear it....
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Post by [don't]fear[the]reaper on Jun 4, 2008 9:52:07 GMT -5
Dizzy approves of poetry. -nods and smirks evilly-
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Post by Time.Of.Dying. on Jun 11, 2008 10:36:17 GMT -5
Hey! Edgar Allen Poe is famous because of his depressing poetry even though he only got really famous after he died. Intentional references about the site, in fact it's kinda what the poem is about. And I second the approval
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Post by [don't]fear[the]reaper on Jun 11, 2008 11:09:46 GMT -5
I should hope so. -nods-
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